Tuesday, 9 December 2014

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY ABOUT EDUCATION

Study to be Employed?

Working in a farm, becoming labor for industry, sweating for serving plates of rice to fulfill the day are not what people want in their daily life, yet Indonesians most likely do. Bureau of Indonesia’s Statistics (BPS) stated that, by Feb 7th, 7.20 percent of productive Indonesians population are unemployed. Meanwhile, the numbers of employment force people to accept low salary jobs; below the standardized salary which government has set. One of the major problem which cause the issue is the mindset of students after they graduate. Most schools may only have been developed students with a rigid structured curriculum, so they are only ready to pass the standardized test, follow the instruction book and work repeatedly over and over until reaching the criteria of success.
In Indonesia, school’s subjects are organized based on the current standardized test’s criteria. The numbers of different subjects for this one particular test have created the unbalanced students’ intelligence. Students are expected to master all subjects, yet they will not use or have least interests in them. If they are able to learn all, they are taught in only a few strict method, so afterward they have a same way in thinking. This is shown by the number of entrepreneurship, which needs creative thinking, in Indonesia is low as 4 percent (Tempo).
Other than that, the way of thinking in Indonesia is developed to follow certain pattern, therefore inventions are scarce in Indonesia. Some teachers taught students only with a single way solutions which they prefer. As the result, some students are afraid to make mistakes, so they follow that solution from their teacher. This process of learning has omitted creativity. All inventions around the world were created because the inventor wanted to have different approach in solving problems. Up to 2010, only sixteen patents, by Indonesians, compared to 654 patents made by Malaysian shows a huge different of both nation.
We may say that Indonesia’s curriculum are strict and rigid, even too difficult, but it is one of the advanced curriculum in the world shown by the presence of college-level material in school curriculum. Nevertheless, when school is trying to make us succeed, some may say the criteria of success is vary. They may teach us calculus to become a great engineer, or biology for becoming a doctor, but painter and sculpture creator are some examples of successful jobs which need practice. Moreover, variety of jobs decrease employment because people become creative and utilize what they have for earning income.
School may have become the problem of the unsuccessful students by setting the criteria of smart and skillful students. The lack of judgment criteria have contributed to numbers of employee, instead of employer. Rigid and strict school’s system correspondingly cut numbers of patents and inventions, even it judge students’ choices for future jobs. Thus, we may need to change Indonesian school’s system to catch up with developed countries which allow students to choose their own classes.





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